You recently went to concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer Say how you feel about his performance Give detail of your musical activities Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you to appraise you for the performance you delivered recently in the Country Club.

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great fans of your voice and I personally listen to your albums whenever I need to relax my heart and soul or for lifting me up whenever I am extremely distressed or feeling anguish.

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, the songs you selected were fantastic and I was just flowing with the lyrics and beats as they were so peaceful. I felt ecstatic and energetic after it was over.

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, I am an intense music lover and sing while performing any regular activities at home like dusting, cooking. Currently, I am learning guitar as I am very fond of musical instruments.

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, I am finding it difficult to sync with the strings and my fingertips get hardened in the process. I would be grateful to you if you could provide me with some tips and tricks while scrolling through the guitar strings and give more insights about the cords. I would be grateful to you for your cooperation. Yours faithfully, Neha Jaiswal

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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7 paragraphs

188 words

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You recently went to concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer Say how you feel about his performance Give detail of your musical activities Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

More and more children are becoming obese. What are the causes of this and what are the solutions?

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Some people believe that a job provides both income and for a social life, while others think that friends should be made outside of work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.