Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.
Some
people
are keen on changing their Correct your spelling
lifestyle
life style
, Correct your spelling
lifestyle
such
as,
visiting places Remove the comma
apply
also
types of food , while others don't want to live in changiable
Correct your spelling
changeable
life
, thus
they try to keep their usual duties. In my opinion, people
choose living
style Correct article usage
a living
belong
to their characters.
On the one hand, We can say, every Correct pronoun usage
that belong
people
want to live in
enjoyable Correct your spelling
an
life
, however
their daily routine and work problems don't give them Add the comma(s)
,however
this
chance, especially the people
who works
under responsibility and pressure. Change the verb form
work
This
reasons impact Correct pronoun usage
These
to
Change preposition
apply
people
's life
and work. Thus
, they want to try new things, which is
changing their apartment, occupation and Correct your spelling
as
also
want to find new friends. By
Change preposition
In
this
way, they can enjoy their life
.
On the other hand
, we know that all people
are not same
, they can not accept any changes. Because changeless Correct article usage
the same
life
also
doing familiar activities are comoft
for them. I think , these Correct your spelling
comfort
people
afraid
of doing new things. They can not risk trying new things. I feel Add a missing verb
are afraid
this
kind of people
are reserved and calm. They like indoor activities and inner piece
more than active Correct your spelling
peace
life
and outdoor activities.
To sum up, Every people
has their own choice. We can not say that these type
of lifestyles are good or bad. The choice of lifestyle depends on the person because Fix the agreement mistake
types
people
choose it based on their temperament.Submitted by Weallneedit9 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite