Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

Some
people
are keen on changing their
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lifestyle
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life style
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lifestyle
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,
such
as
,
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visiting places
also
types of food , while others don't want to live in
changiable
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changeable
life
,
thus
they try to keep their usual duties. In my opinion,
people
choose
living
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style
belong
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to their characters. On the one hand, We can say, every
people
want to live
in
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enjoyable
life
,
however
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their daily routine and work problems don't give them
this
chance, especially the
people
who
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under responsibility and pressure.
This
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reasons impact
to
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people
's
life
and work.
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, they want to try new things, which
is
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as
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changing their apartment, occupation and
also
want to find new friends.
By
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this
way, they can enjoy their
life
.
On the other hand
, we know that all
people
are not
same
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, they can not accept any changes. Because changeless
life
also
doing familiar activities are
comoft
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comfort
for them. I think , these
people
afraid
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of doing new things. They can not risk trying new things. I feel
this
kind of
people
are reserved and calm. They like indoor activities and inner
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peace
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more than active
life
and outdoor activities. To sum up, Every
people
has their own choice. We can not say that these
type
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types
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of lifestyles are good or bad. The choice of lifestyle depends on the person because
people
choose it based on their temperament.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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