Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,

people

are facing newer environmental challenges. Some

people

say that the extinction of particular

species

of plants and animals is the prime concern whereas I agree with the other side of the view that at present there are more crucial environmental issues. In

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paragraphs below, I will discuss both

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views and explain why I agree with the latter view. There is no doubt that the fauna and flora help in maintaining the balance of our Planet Earth. They build the diversity of the ecological system and

hence

, it is vital to

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them. We are losing various

species

of plants and animals because of excessive deforestation in order to construct industries. It is important to take appropriate

measure

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in order to preserve the rare

species

of

animal

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animals

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and plants, which are on the verge of

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extinction. We can achieve

this

by spreading awareness and educating the

people

about the need to preserve our endangered

species

.

However

, in my opinion, there are other environmental problems that need immediate attention.

For example

, air and

water

pollution have become major concerns now. Due to urbanization, there is

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rise in the number of vehicles on the roads and that has reduced the air quality.

People

are forced to breathe polluted air which causes various lung diseases. According to research done at

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Howard

university

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, cases of lung disease have increased by 27 times over the years.

Also

,

water

pollution is another cause of concern. Due to bad human habits like discharging factory effluents into

water

bodies, access to pure

water

has

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.

As a result

, many

people

and animals die each year from drinking polluted

water

. As these problems directly affect our health, in my opinion, they need more attention.