You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear David, I am writing to let you know that I am not satisfied with the poor condition of some of the furniture at apartment B 10.

Firstly

, let me introduce myself. I am Jay who lives in apartment B 10. I have been renting in

this

compound for 3 years so far, but 2 weeks ago I moved to B 10 as it is on

ground

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floor. Let me explain what is wrong with my furniture.

Firstly

, the dishwashing machine is broken it is not cleaning properly.

Consequently

, I have to clean my dishes manually, which is very time-consuming.

Secondly

although

my refrigerator is cooling the food properly, its motor is loud so much that I cannot sleep at night.

Finally

, I need to change the microwave because the current one is small. I would kindly ask you to fix the dishwashing machine and to call someone to check the refrigerator's motor. And to change my microwave to a bigger one if you do not mind. I hope you will consider my situation favourably. Best regards, Jay

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

178 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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