You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.
Arguably, it is believed that concerning the environment's problems only the
ruling-power
and big enterprises are able to solve the conundrum, not the ordinary folk. Personally, I strongly disagree with the view since indoor Correct your spelling
ruling power
pollution
counts when assessing the harmful substances released into the atmosphere. Although
in
many times the cabinet and its allies seem to be the most indicated to that. Change preposition
apply
This
essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide anecdotal evidence to prove the arguments.
On the one hand, individuals implement the local authorities
measures. Change noun form
authorities'
authority's
In other words
, the contribution is vital to put forward any sort of measures outlined by the regime. For instance
, in China where the
air Correct article usage
apply
pollution
, especial
indoor Change the word
especially
pollution
was considered to be the worst throughout the out, the local crowd played a vital role to tackle
it since they followed the stricter governments measures Change preposition
in tackling
such
as opening the households'
windows when cooking, avoiding the use of firewoods. Change noun form
households
As a result
, the amount of carbon emission was significantly cut down as well as
it shrunk the local carbon footprints. Moreover
, the overriding outlet to vanish
Verb problem
apply
the
indoor Correct article usage
apply
pollution
is through inhabitants' contribution.
On the other hand
, big companies and the ruling regime are pivotal to
tackling the carbon footprints. Because of the sense of power they possess to design policies and monitor them, they are the key element to Change preposition
in
solve
the saga. Wrong verb form
solving
For example
, even if the
environmentalists and scientists report and advise the Correct article usage
apply
world-powers
about Correct your spelling
world powers
the
environmental destruction, the Correct article usage
apply
last
action depend
on them. Correct subject-verb agreement
depends
Hence
, large enterprises along with
the authorities' actions make difference
.
In conclusion, notwithstanding the great difference Correct article usage
a difference
done by
the large companies and the authorities, the ordinary population has something to say concerning Verb problem
between
this
great battle. Therefore
, I still strongly disagree with the view. In addition
, I recommend the world-power joins
efforts to diminish Correct subject-verb agreement
join
this
evil.Submitted by vascomunguarepenete on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
coherence and cohesion
You should provide a clear thesis statement in the introduction to address the task prompt directly. Your introduction lacks a precise response to the extent of your agreement or disagreement with the statement.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that your essay follows a logical structure with clear topic sentences for each paragraph. Make sure to link your ideas cohesively, using appropriate transition words and phrases to guide the reader through your argument effectively.
task achievement
You have provided relevant examples to support your argument. However, try to develop these examples further to enhance the depth of your analysis and show a more thorough understanding of the topic.