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Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

#teachers #situation #time #action
Dear Sir Cruz, I writing
this
 letter to inform you that I cannot continue my evening course. You know that I`m working as a
full time
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 nurse in Dr Samir Abbas Hospital. Due to lack of
staff
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,staff
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 I need to take the
oncall
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call
on call
during
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from
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 six o`clock in the evening to twelve midnight
everyday
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every day
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 in
operating
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the operating
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 room. Because anytime they can call me for emergency case. The school is far from the hospital if ever
i
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I
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 will
recieve
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receive
call
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a call
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i`ts
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it's
 really hard for me to come
in
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 the hospital. I cannot risk.
If
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 it possible if I can continue
next
semestral
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semester
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? Thank you for your kind
and
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apply
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consideration.Hoping for approval of my request.
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Yours
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Your
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Yours
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 sincerely, Grace Andres
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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