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Writing Samples
Band 4

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays the
garbage
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 all over the world is increasing.
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 is mainly because of
increased
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the increased
an increased
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number of
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apply
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population many population
people
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 and no discipline. Many
people
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 just
throwing
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throw
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 their
garbage
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 anywhere like candy wrap, they look small but if you
imagining
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 all over the one
people
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 throwing
its
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it
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 will become big
garbage
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.Many
people
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not
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do not
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thinking
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think
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 good in the environment they don`t care what will be the cause. Many
government
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governments
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 trying to solve
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 problem or lessen the
garbage
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 by separating the biodegradable and
non biodegradable
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non-biodegradable
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.Some
country
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countries
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 practising
this
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 already like Singapore, Germany and many more.
Some
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In some
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country
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countries
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 the
plastic
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 bottle they make bricks, some biodegradable they make
fertilize
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fertilizer
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to
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for
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 their plants. But
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 is not enough,they should implement all over the world that they will use in the
super market
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supermarket
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 the reusable bag and in the restaurant or
fastfood
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fast food
fast-food
 no using of
plastic
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straws
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straw
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,straw
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 they can bring and use the reusable straw if they want. And they should have the
the
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garbage
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color
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colour
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 code like
example
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for example
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 blue for paper and cardboard, green for
plastic
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bottle
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bottles
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,black for glass,yellow for
plastic
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bag
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bags
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 and red for
can
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cans
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 and many more. It will help the rubbish collector to know what
in
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is in
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 the
garbage
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. If it possible
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 to help
other country
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another country
other countries
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 to
stablish
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establish
 or share the knowledge of how to take all
plastic
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 to make
a bricks
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bricks
a brick
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 or like
example
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the example
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 in Singapore they making the
garbage
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 for electricity.
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 will be a good help to lessen the rubbish or it could be possible that all
garbage
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 will recycle and use for something better to our mother earth.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • sustainability
  • landfill
  • recycle
  • single-use products
  • waste management
  • regulatory measures
  • composting
  • biodegradable
  • environmental impact
  • incentives
  • sustainable practices
  • circular economy
  • zero waste
  • responsibility
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