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Transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved?

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MUN is an educational simulation in which students have a chance to visualize themselves as delegates and experts on international relations.
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 and foremost, MUN gives opportunities to look at the issues from various perspectives.
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, it gives a chance to discuss global problems and exchange our views.
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, we will be aware of
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 situation on the global scene. Taking into account historical factors and
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will expand our horizons.
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, analytical abilities will build capacity to predict
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international relations. it develops our public speaking, communication and collaboration skills. It develops our public speaking and communication skills. I truly believe I have something to contribute: by being there, I can bring unique insight, perspective, and a positive, collaborative attitude.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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