You have seen an advertisement in the Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter 1. Explain why you would like the job 2. give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ 3. say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter with regard to the notice I have read in the magazine regarding the offer for baby-sitting your son in Australia. I would like to apply for the position,

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mentioning the details, which clearly depicts why I am perfect for the position. As a profession, I always dreamt of working in Montessori taking care of and playing with the kids dedicating my day to serving them. After reading the pamphlet, I felt it as a good fortune to migrate to a foreign country and start with my dream job by initiating as a babysitter at your place. According to my perspective, I fit best for

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work as I have completed my post-graduation in Home Science and

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did a six-month Diploma in childcare development at the Department of Child Psychology in India.

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have an internship at Acharya College of Home Science in

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field.

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, I can handle the children very easily as I have the idea of taking good care of toddlers as well as youngsters starting from age 1-8. Barring the above job, I would definitely opt to take a crash course in some playschools especially during the evening hours when you guys are back to take care of your child,

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, I can learn more about the skills and implement them later in a full-time teacher in any of the reputed schools in Melbourne after your contract of six months will be over. I hope you find the letter well. I am looking forward to hearing a positive answer from you. I request you to please look into the matter and acknowledge the same. Thanks and Regards Anjali Sharma

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

283 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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