In many countries around the world, young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples.

Nowadays leaving the parent's house after finishing high school is becoming more prevalent among the young generation around the world. They might rent an independent flat or rent a place with their friends.

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phenomenon has its own two sides, I believe that its positive side clashes with the negative part. I will discuss two reasons for my belief in

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essay. On one hand, a great number of benefits are being discussed by experts for the youths and the most blatant one is their

independency

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. The young generation has always been viewed as a group

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is

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and

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the hardest one to deal with.

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, a university student prefers to spend his weekend with his friends and gather in their houses while

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generation prefers to rest.

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,

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might occur between them which can result in resentment.

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independency

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independence

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plays an increasingly important role during these years, it might be better for them to leave their parents' houses to save their relationships.

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, parents

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can benefit from

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distance. Living with our offspring might be preferable to living alone but it suffers from the disadvantages which put us in a situation that we might not be able to afford. To illustrate, the oldest member of a family; who has been working all their lifelong to support the younger ones, is being viewed as the main person who is in charge.

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perspective usually continues even till younger members are able to earn money.

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, we expect our

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to buy

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groceries

when we are living in their house.

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, we are burdens and leaving home might help them to have better lives. To sum up, living independently after being

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is being more popular in the

twentieth-century

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. I agree that the advantages of

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much greater than its drawbacks. It is noteworthy to bear in mind that

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modern lifestyle is not only beneficial for youngsters but

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for parents.