Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the one only way to learn the language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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of the Use synonyms
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world,
population
is increasing alarmingly. Use synonyms
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. Overpopulation causes a considerable number of problems. In poor Use synonyms
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it is difficult to provide enough food to feed even the present number of Add a comma
countries,
people
. In addition, education to limit the number of children per family is not always successful. Poorer Use synonyms
countries
usually have a lot of unemployment too, and an increase in Use synonyms
population
simply makes the situation worse. Use synonyms
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also
suffers when there are too many Linking Words
people
living on the land. In rich, industrialised and developing Use synonyms
countries
it is very difficult for governments to provide effective public services in overcrowded cities. Use synonyms
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, there is usually a great deal more crime, which is often Linking Words
due to
high rates of unemployment. Linking Words
Further
large increases in Linking Words
population
only cause more overcrowding, unemployment and crime. There are two main solutions to the overpopulation problem. Use synonyms
Firstly
, every woman who is pregnant, but who does not want to give birth, should be allowed by law to have an abortion. Linking Words
Secondly
, governments must educate Linking Words
people
to limit the size of the family. In China, couples are penalised financially if they have more than one child. Use synonyms
This
may seem cruel, but the "one-child policy" is beginning to have an effect in the world's most populous nation. Eventually, similar policies might Linking Words
also
be necessary in other crowded nations Linking Words
such
as India, Linking Words
for example
. Linking Words
To sum up
, if the Linking Words
population
explosion continues, many more Use synonyms
people
will die of starvation in poor Use synonyms
countries
, and life in the cities, even in affluent nations, will become increasingly difficult.Use synonyms
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