Human activities over the period of time have increased global warming. What are the primary causes? What solutions can you suggest?

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modern scenario,the environmental problems

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by

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of humans participation in all activities

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as using more vehicles,extinction of

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and plants.

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essay would analyse a few causes of

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phenomenon and suggests some ways to ameliorate

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situation. To embark on,our ecosystem is confronted with

a more critical subjects

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as global warming due to the

relase

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release

of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere by cars and factories.

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,burning fossil fuel

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the ozone layer which shields the earth from the sun's rays.

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the layers depletion

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has adverse

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on both plants and

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as well as human beings.

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incidence

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the incidence

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of skin cancer has risen because of decreasing protection from the sun radiation.

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,the main significant factor of global warming is deforestation.nowadays,many individuals are cutting trees for their habitat purposes,

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it will results in the extinction of many

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and plants because tress are very imperative to us in terms of protecting from the

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bad weather as well as providing food.

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,according to the forest department,

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and trees have been deteriorating day by day as human activities

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in

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trimming forests for constructing new buildings. On another hand,some remedial measures can be taken

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into

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reduce

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the problems.

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,everyone should be aware of the importance of

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the environment

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people should be encouraged to commute by public transport

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of private vehicles,

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in order to follow

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rule, we can reduce difficulties but not completely.

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,these days,many individuals have

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in terms of cars and bikes,

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they should be encouraged to use public

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transport

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as buses and trains,so in

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way,we can reduce the pollution from

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vehicles

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program

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authorities take responsibility to plant trees by the hand of every citizen. To conclude,environmental issues mostly impact

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greenery

and human beings in terms of pollution from

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vehicles

and deforestation,so I believe that we should redouble our attention on preventing the destructing of the environment.