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summerise the information by selecting and reporting teh main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The pie chart and table describe the information about the figures of the
Australian
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population
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 with various parts of the world nationalities as well as living places
such
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 as urban and rural. Looking from an overall perspective,
Australian
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 citizens are living mostly in Australia as compared to Dutch citizens ar the low majority meanwhile Chinese residents predominated the
city
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 in Australia. According to the pie chart indicates that 73% of the
Australian
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 citizens are lived in the total
Australian
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population
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. 14% of the
population
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 is other and British residents at 7%, people from China at 2%, New Zealanders are 3% and Dutch
population
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 is 1%. In terms of living place, the majority of the
city
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 places occupied by Chinese 99%,
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, they live in the countryside is just1%. Australians are lived 80% in the
city
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 and they like to live in the countryside,
therefore
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, Australians
population
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 is peaked in the countryside. Dutch residents mostly prefer to live in the
city
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 as well as the rural place at 17%. British and New Zealanders living rates in both areas are
identical
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in identical
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 proportions.
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