Research shows that global warming is caused by human activity. What are the possible effects of climate change and what can governments and individuals do to reduce these?
Nowadays, global warming is one of the major issues that all of the
world
Change to a plural noun
worlds
concerned
about. Add a missing verb
is concerned
Also
, research shows human activity leads to global heating. This
essay will shows
some possible effects of climate change and ways of reducing Change the verb form
show
these problem
for Change the determiner
this problem
these problems
government
and Correct article usage
the government
people
.
In recent years, there are lots of climate change signs that clearly shows global warming and impacts on the planet such
as,
rising minimum and maximum temperature. Remove the comma
apply
For example
, in the north and south pole ice bergs
are melting and it changes sea levels so, Correct your spelling
icebergs
people
cannot cope with new environment or weather elements and harm they
life. that ranges from, beach Correct pronoun usage
their
people
life so they should move to other areas. On the other hand
, jungles are fired due to, climate change. It hurts the wildlife and animals can die. The example can be seen the Australian jungles had fired and many animals died. In addition
, these changes damaged everything in the world and is
the major reason Change the verb form
are
of
the drought, floods and famine.
Change preposition
for
However
, people
can reduce the
global warming as individuals. Correct article usage
apply
Such
as, saving energy at home. It means Add the particle
to use
use
less electricity and heating or cooling Change the form of the verb
using
powers
. Fix the agreement mistake
power
For example
, instead
of heaters they can wear more layers or hanging
out the clothes to dry Wrong verb form
hang
instead
of using a dryer. And it is advisable people
tend to walk, cycle or use public transport rather private vehicle. So, it decreases greenhouse gas emission
. Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
In
Change preposition
On
other
side, authorities can boycott products that harm the environment Correct article usage
the other
such
as,
palm oil, Remove the comma
apply
single use
plastics and soaps which leads to deforestation.
To conclude, global warming Add a hyphen
single-use
that
caused by human activity has damaged impact but it is possible to reduce and control that as individuals or governments.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
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