Human activities over the period of time have increased global warming. What are the primary causes? What solutions can you suggest?

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Global warming can
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as a long term heating of the Earth's
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climate system, it started with the industrial revolution.
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activities
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 increased the heat of the air,
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oceans
, and land, due to the heat-trapping of the
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greenhouse
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atmosphere
. The development of
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humanity includes the
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transportation
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essay and how we can reduce their impacts. Starting with the transportations system, it is a massive network
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of air transport, water transport, and road transport. On
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industry. It becomes an easy way to travel
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transportation
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including privet and public
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transportation
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as city buses, and underground trains. The reduction suggesting can be done by proving faster electric train lines to connect the cities,
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, adopting
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as electric,
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compressed
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by the
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eliminate
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, applying filters for factories and manufactories and imposing
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penalty
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follow the rules. Overall, global warming is a cumulative problem, it took many years to see its negative impacts.
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, it will need
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more to solve it.
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, the focus should be on having a global union working on finding solutions to reduce the impacts.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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