Write a letter to your manager about your work from last year. Include What you did What you think you could improve A training request

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you about the list of tasks accomplished by me

last

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year.

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to that, I have expressed my desire to attend

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workshops related to cloud technologies in order to elevate my skillset. In 2021, I have completed more than seven projects as part of our sales strategy. Among them, four are related to the automation tasks to aid other teams in our department to monitor their challenges in advance to decrease their response time. As part of our analysis, I have identified a few specific areas of weakness

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as risk handling and resource planning which has to be converted into strength.

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, I would say that there are several opportunities to work with you

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year. It is necessary to re-skill our workforce to work with the latest software products, it would be better if any pieces of training related to web services can be arranged for Internal development. Awaiting your response, related to the requests and actions referred. Yours sincerely, Surya.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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