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Nowadays, individuals are taking their families abroad with them on every business trip. What are the advantages and disadvantages for individuals and their families? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the contemporary world, there is the trend of working people to accompany their
families
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 abroad on almost all
business
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 trips. It is often pointed out that
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 trend can be recognized as both benefits and drawbacks to businessmen and their
families
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. One of the advancements is to keep the
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 of the family easier than the situation when a family lives far away.
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 is because basically, a weak relationship among people may be caused by a lack of direct communication, and
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 a distant resilience will lead to its circumstance in a high possibility due to the difficulty of meeting each other.
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, even if
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 have some technological devices which can contact indirectly, it may be difficult to find the actual feelings of the other family members within a just few minutes. To ,
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 the relationship of the family tough, meeting face to face is normally required. If
families
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 are taken on a
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 trip, they are likely to talk directly every single day, which will lead to a perfect family
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.
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, as one of the flaws, it can be
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 said that employees are possibly irritated with their concentration for work because they have to take care of the life of their
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 in unfamiliar countries. Most
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 are needed to change their daily routines which they used to do in their home countries,
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, going to a school, working in a certain company and playing with their friends. Adopting their favourite activities into the other ones which they can take in the new countries may be difficult without any their own relationships there.
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, one of the family members, who has the purpose of working as a
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 trip and make new relationship easily there, are likely required to support to establish a new life for their
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. In conclusion, to remain family
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 strict, it is more beneficial to take their family on their
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 trip, but if individuals need to concentrate their works, it can be better to avoid taking their
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Work-life balance
  • Cultural exposure
  • Logistical challenges
  • Educational opportunities
  • Financial cost
  • Adaptability
  • Family unity
  • Cultural shock
  • Broadened horizons
  • Disruption
  • Distraction
  • Support network
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