Some people think they have right to use as much freshwater as they want. Others believe governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your option

Some people are of the opinion that they should have complete rights to consume freshwater as they wish

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supporters of the opposite viewpoint state that

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valuable resource should be strictly monitored by authorities. From my very own point of view, the former makes more sense and

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will be explained thoroughly with evidence and justifications. It seems undeniable for those who advocate for stricter regulations on

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usage that it is crucial to ensure

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precious resource is preserved for our future to come. To our knowledge, 70% of the world is covered by saltwater which humans are less likely to rely on for

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use,

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5% of usable

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is freshwater.

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, many people are aware of what would happen to humanity if the

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ran out.

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, the

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of clean

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is a pressing issue

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currently affecting the livelihoods of many, especially in West Africa, where people are struggling to scrape

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off wells or dry lakes. To make

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worse,

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not even clean or usable.

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, citizens from these regions are fighting infectious diseases caused by contaminated

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.

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, government intervention in

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consumption is definitely a reasonable solution. Having said that, opponents on

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matter have argued that the plentiful of

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coming from various sources from rainfall to rivers, lakes and ponds should give us unlimited access and we can use

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. It is evident that humans have been using

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for our daily activities for centuries, and

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has not yet brought us any harm. To

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justify

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, industries or enterprises have been depending on

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for the majority of their production. If

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freedom was taken away,

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might put great burdens on these companies, and in the long term, will affect the well-being of their employees.

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, when the government of Australia imposed

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activities during the dry season, many households and businesses were having a difficult time adjusting. Because of that, they had to lay off employees on certain days as they could only afford to run their machinery on certain days

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the

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cut. In conclusion, raising awareness

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freshwater can be considered important when it comes to preventing future repercussions by implementing regulations. I myself personally think that it is

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important to consider the livelihoods of millions and the consequences of deriving people’s freedom of using what

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Mother Earth has to offer.