Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

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modern scenario,the advances in technology

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been increasing day by day,

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it enables more data for all

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without age disparities.

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,there will be no prospect to

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secrets of many individuals,which means that everyone can

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our personal messages.

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the

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brings few negative causes,there are

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more benefits to

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trend.

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essay will go into better detail with my subject view. To embark on,the main benefit of using the

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continuously is we can acquire more knowledge about the outer world and we may be updated with the latest news as well as we can know what is happening around us and what government is going to

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decisions to modify the amenities around the globe.

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,nowadays,it is

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to spend quality time with friends and relatives,so the

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facilitates many amenities in terms of

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and entertainment purposes.

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,multitudes can be communicated with their friends and families through the social websites

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as Facebook,Twitter and WhatsApp,

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these apps made easier

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among

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.

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,it not only ensures audio call but

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enable

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video

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a video

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call facility.

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,my parents are residing very far away from me,so I daily use to interact with my family through

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. On another hand,it is truly said,no rose without thrones.can the drawback of

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initiation can be ignored.the most significant drawback is that reduction in the

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communication

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,

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it will

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to

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the

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relationships

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between the multitudes.

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,when I was young,many

people

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used to talk to

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without any involvement of the

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.as

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of

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,

people

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could make harmonious

realtionships

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relationships

with everyone.

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,another disadvantage is that children may not have concentrated

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the

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studies because they are already habituated to playing

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games. To conclude,every coin has both sides.using

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social media facilitates more benefits than demerits.the pros are easier

communication

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and

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with the news.the cons are reduction concentration in other activities as well as relationships.