In the future it may be necessary for us to live on other planets. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now researching planets that could be a possible home, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that we should find a new possible home
such
as Mars in the future. Thus
money should be allocated for researching Mars that could be the possible place
.
I completely disagree with this
statement. First
and foremost it does not cause effective and practical. Our huge mother earth still can be explored further
. We still have a place
to go. Only a small percentage of people inhabit this
planet. For example
, the Indonesian government plans to move her capital to a new place
somewhere in East Kalimantan. This
is a practical solution to reduce the overcrowded population furthermore
mass movement to a new planet is not easy and our human life is not eternal. We are facing death every second
and minute. Restoring our motherland is a better solution rather than spending money to search for a new planet.
In conclusion, our earth is still the best place
to stay. A lot more areas can be explored.Submitted by sufianardi on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion