Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students.

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modern world, technology is rapidly developing. One of the technologies that
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been developed until now is
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computer. We can not deny that
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help us to efficiently solve our daily problems,
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as analyzing data and solving complex mathematical problems in school.
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introducing
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into the
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is an important thing.
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, dependence on
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especially in
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classroom
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may cause a certain risk for
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. Here, I explain my point of view of
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as two-sided blades in teaching.
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has
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advantages as a helping tool for
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and
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in the
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. One of the advantages is that
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help
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student to do their task way faster than using paper or pencils.
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will save time both for
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and
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teachers
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. The computer
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helps both parties to find a variety of
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for class material by connecting
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to the internet. As for me, I believe that using
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in direct
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teaching will clearly help
students
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and
teachers
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to increase their critical thinking. On the other side, using
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in the
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could build a
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character on
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.
Students
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may refuse to use conventional tools
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as pen or paper to finish their
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. They would think that will take a longer time. The student will
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be likely to do the class task as an individual or we can say that most
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the
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will not accept to do a working group project.
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situation will probably decrease
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' socializing skills. In the end, using
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on
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could
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decrease their creativity.
Computers
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are very essential in helping
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to transfer knowledge or class materials to
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. But in the end, it is way important to keep on giving proper guidance
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teachers
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to
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so that
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will not giving negative impacts.

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