Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students.

In
this
modern world, technology is rapidly developing. One of the technologies that
has
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been developed until now is
a
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computer. We can not deny that
computers
help us to efficiently solve our daily problems,
such
as analyzing data and solving complex mathematical problems in school.
Therefore
introducing
computers
into the
classroom
is an important thing.
On the other hand
, dependence on
computers
especially in
classroom
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the classroom
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may cause a certain risk for
students
. Here, I explain my point of view of
computers
as two-sided blades in teaching.
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has
a
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oflot
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lot
advantages as a helping tool for
teachers
and
students
in the
classroom
. One of the advantages is that
computers
help
the
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student to do their task way faster than using paper or pencils.
This
will save time both for
students
and
also
teachers
. The computer
also
helps both parties to find a variety of
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for class material by connecting
computers
to the internet. As for me, I believe that using
computers
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teaching will clearly help
students
and
teachers
to increase their critical thinking. On the other side, using
computers
in the
classroom
could build a
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character on
students
.
Students
may refuse to use conventional tools
such
as pen or paper to finish their
assessment
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. They would think that will take a longer time. The student will
also
be likely to do the class task as an individual or we can say that most
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the
students
will not accept to do a working group project.
This
situation will probably decrease
students
' socializing skills. In the end, using
computers
on
students
could
also
decrease their creativity.
Computers
are very essential in helping
teachers
to transfer knowledge or class materials to
students
. But in the end, it is way important to keep on giving proper guidance
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teachers
to
students
so that
computers
will not giving negative impacts.

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