It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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Nowadays students' approach to
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education is changing and
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of them is to take a gap
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after
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school
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and cons of 12
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gap between
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and institute.
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one
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year
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off makes students' life more effective and it
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the bond between parents and youngsters.
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while studying at
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the young are buried
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their books and do not have enough
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to relax passing
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with their family members. A gap
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enables them to Cram or
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intensively until they know the subject inside out. At the same
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time
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they may have a rest by sufficing
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with their loved ones and have some space from studies. Another benefit is the opportunity to travel and
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a lifelong profession. Some
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students
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lose control over everything studying hard for exams and do not know what they want or where
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their documents. In
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case, a
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year
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vacation helps them to travel around the world, refresh their mind as well as find their own position. As the result, they realise which sphere is suitable for them and decide with
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the
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university. Turning to the drawbacks,
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the
main
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is
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of
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vacation.
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can have catastrophic effects not only for youth
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but
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for society. Youngsters who are completely free from any academic stuff can indulge themselves in other activities
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as virtual games or bullying. It leads to some health problems with eyesight,
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that bullying grows
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the criminal
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rate in the area. As
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bad-tempered
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bad- tempered
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bad-tempered
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behaviour disrupts people around and
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violence, the young may commit a crime unconsciously. To sum up, it depends on individuals how to spend their 365 days leave after
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.
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they use their
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in
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inappropriate
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appropriate
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an appropriate
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way, it has lucrative effects.
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, the misusage of
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period may have some destructive repercussions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gap year
  • work experience
  • internships
  • traveling
  • life experiences
  • personal development
  • independent
  • self-reliant
  • educational progress
  • graduation timeline
  • financial burden
  • academic momentum
  • structured academic environment
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