Some people think that all University student study whatever the like. Other believe that they should only be allowed to to study subject that will be useful in future. Such as those related to science and technology. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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individual

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are arguing that

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students should

allowed

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to study related

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interest in

university

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the university

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.

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claim that

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students

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only

study

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the

subject

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helpful

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in

future

.

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opinion the former

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appear to be more rational.

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positive

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and negative effects of

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thus

will lead to a logical conclusion. There are some reasons why students should choose

subject

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whatever they like. The

first

and foremost is that it students should have technical

knowledge

but not necessary that operation can only make the career in technology. Some

student

explore their fields like fashion designing at museum acting or animation. It not only have have a promising

future

but

also

provide good money . If they choose the

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course to their interest they work hard because they have enough

knowledge

about it

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they spend their most time in their courses. In

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study

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they get

better

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job related

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field.

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,if

a

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mechanical

engineer

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engineers

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have enough

knowledge

about

instrument

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instruments

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so they solve any difficulty easily related to

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the machine

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machine

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. Alternatively, other people think that they should only

allowed

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allow

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the

subject

that will

important

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in

future

. We have connected with many things which need technical

knowledge

.

also

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it is undeniable merit that science and technology could be lead to find easily occupation in

upcoming

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decade. Because of

this

point, its field job will be

further

demand

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in the

future

.

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example

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scientist

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are not only working for

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future

but

also

for making everyone's better

future

. In conclusion ,I suppose,

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in the hand of a

student

to think and decided. It will create a balance in society among all the

professional

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and when the

student

can provide the opportunity to choose their

subject

.