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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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 some people build their career in
one
 company, others believe that it is better to change working places. Every person is unique and cannot repeat
one
 another. Moving to
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new company weather
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of
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 course, depends on individuals willing, but
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 some factors can influence on their decisions. On the
one
 hand, cooperating in the same place means steadily levelling up
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 career steps, and because of familiar atmosphere, a person can avoid any
unconvenience
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inconvenience
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 the help of colleagues, often called as a family. At the same time, shifting
one
's working place might give
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better job opportunities for the future.
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 it is so risky
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 because new is not always good. Feeling stressed during
adaptation
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 period affects
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job quality, which is not welcomed by the authority and even rising
probability
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 of position dismissing. To sum up,
working
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 place does not matter
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 if a person does it with pleasure.
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