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Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience.

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Many
people
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 think that the most effective method of learning about
life
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 is by receiving the advice of family and friends. It is considered by some
people
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 that personal
experience
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 is the best
way
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 of learning about
life
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.
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, most teenagers prefer to listen to old
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 for learning about
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 due to their
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 in
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such
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 kind of situation with
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 who are older than us.The best
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 to learn about future
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 is to discuss it with family members.
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, adolescents have not experienced and they may be facing difficult
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 ,
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, less economic, lose wealth and
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problems
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 related to their health so they need to listen clearly to their parents and experienced friends without disappointments.
On the other hand
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, most
people
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 think that personal
experience
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 is an effective
way
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 to learn about
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 because if
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experience
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 it during their adolescent
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, it is beneficial and useful for the
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life
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. Each person needs to control their lives because all
problems
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 will be solved by themselves so everything depends on themselves. As an example of
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, all famous
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 don't have advisers to learn about
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 but they achieve their goals without old
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 or friends. In conclusion, Individual existence is the easiest
way
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 to learn about
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 for every young
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.
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,they know different kinds of
problems
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,be patient and
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 how to enter difficult situations.

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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