Some people believe that it is the government's responsibility to provide care and financial to support people after they retire. Others, however, think that individuals themselves saving money in their own care when they are old. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is a common belief that the
money
has to be ready themselves before people
quit their job because they are old. However
, there is a more persuasive argument that people
should be supported by the government
.
On the one hand, most people
usually save their earned money
for any reason. One of them, most important reason is that when they do not have a job for their age and the aid of government
is limited also
the budget of the country is not fully so they have to effort to gather the money
. For example
, the government
offer some money
to retired people
but it is very insufficient to manage their house because they should be paid many parts such
as buying food, paying rent and medicine.
Nevertheless
, the organization have to support the retired people
because there are some people
who do not prepare the plan for their's life after retirement. Moreover
, these people
mostly can not be working for a long time or be getting sufficient money
. For instance
, when the government
stop giving assistance to people
, many nations are not able to continue and can suffer to their life because they do not have enough money
.
To sum up, it is apparent that people
prepare the money
for before retirement. On the other hand
, it is more undeniable that a different one to ready for the individuals, the organization should be support nations. In my opinion, the government
have to assist people
because it is the reason the country part and why they are existence.Submitted by vezeta0504 on
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