As countries become more industrialised, more people move from the countryside into urban areas. What are some problems caused by this and how can we solve them?

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development of countries

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causing mass betrayal of the countryside, resulting in more populated urban

areas

. Many difficulties occur in regards to

this

problem.

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essay will discuss the rise of hardships of

people

moving out of the countryside ,

aswell

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as well

as the solutions that might

pervent

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prevent

overpopulation in rural places. The main difficulty is as society progressively gets more marginalised, the

city

will continuously build infrastructures that disable the

people

to live in safe conditions

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since there are too many buildings that occupy the space for citizens. Even though

this

will definitely increase the economic status and maybe provide more income to the residents, it still does a great amount of damage to the living conditions of the public.

For instance

, discomfort in travelling around the

city

, since it is built to benefit organisations

instead

of the commodities to the working class. Another serious issue

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constant

emition

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emission

emotion

of gasses and pollution, that are continuously turning the

citt

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city

site

into a toxic wasteland, which leads

people

from urban

areas

to never want to get a job or even visit the

city

as it is

health damaging

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. The solution for the

first

problem can be surrounding the

city

with small businesses and leaving giant organisations in a modest setting, not to interfere with other small businesses. Other solutions can include: having accessible transport from all

city

points to keep a balance in the urban and

city

life. Regarding the environmental difficulties , constructing more parks and botanical gardens is crucial, not only will it attract

people

from rural

areas

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but ,

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it is

also

a breath of fresh air for local residents. To sum up, a great

amount

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of

people

are leaving to urban

areas

because of the rapid growth of

city

life,

thus

creating problems on both sides of the spectrum.

Although

these causes are preventable in the future, they may develop into something detrimental and even deadly if not taken care of quickly.