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there are numerous

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languages

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will throw a glimpse to their culture and tradition which

differiantiates

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differentiates

people from one another.

Culture

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diversity is something very pivotal these days and cultural exchange can be done

through

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many ways. One of the easiest and fastest

way

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is to

learns

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their native

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which helps to under different people,

diverisified

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culture ,their unique tradition and their history. Say

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example, there

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28

offical

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official

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language

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and I happen to know only 2

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language

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which makes it difficult to get accepted by other native

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speakers. Having said that, I would like to talk about a

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,

Iam

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planning to learn.

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started watching

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tv shows,

i

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got fascinated with their

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and their tradition and

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I wanted to explore it more and recently I got an opportunity for that by getting a secondment offer to

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korea

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for 6 months . Now that I got an opportunity,

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I am

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hesitant

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of the fact that I

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didn't

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their native

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and

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inorder

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to learn that

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,

iam

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planning to join an

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academy

here in

bahrain

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called Global for a 3 months course. and

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iIt

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it

is often argued, education of young ones has been positively impacted by participating in competitive activities, whereas a fair proportion of individuals disagrees with the notion. I am, to some extent, convinced with as

competition

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is a necessity, nowadays, but over competitiveness can create a detrimental impact on a child’s education. The beneficiary of competitive games has boosted

children

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morale along with competing skills in a positive manner, which ultimately develops their academics. Games are usually organized to teach

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to cope

up

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with under

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situations, and

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this

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approach tends them to fight

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exam

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.

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, during the examination, even scholar

students

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have been observed anxious due to exam

pressure

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;

however

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, sports

player

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can be always seen as confident and active in an examination hall.

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, pupils experience to stand up against either win or lose, when playing adventurous sports,

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will boost up their competing skills gradually that will help them in their education level.

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, these practices have uplifted a child’s academic records due to confidence and ability to survive in

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competitiveness

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atmosphere. Turning to its negative approach,

students

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who are completely indulging in a

competition

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aura may lose their study skills. To endorse sport as a career prospect, most of the

students

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start neglecting their studies and lose interest in it.

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, pupils who

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to manage sheer

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get psychological

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on

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the mind,

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disorder can inhibit their learning ability as well as mental growth.

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, the cutthroat

competition

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to achieve good grades can lead to performing better among others, if they are unable to achieve the desired goal, ultimately, can put them in a strain and may harm their mental activity.

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, sports

competition

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can lead to negative consequences on a child’s mind. To conclude, I believe that gaming

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is vital for the youngster but it should not be over competitiveness, though it must be played with

playful

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manner

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of stiff

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.