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Nowadays media is paying a lot of attention to life stories of famous people in fields such as cinema, sports and modeling. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

#media #attention #life #stories #people #fields #cinema #sports #trend
Some people prefer that
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to be permanent or principled. If you always do certain work and you direct your own goal, you may achieve
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 in your profession.
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 places, eating different foods,
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 job. Visiting places where you have never been always
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 to learn new culture and
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. Through tasting other countries' food you may find the food you like or
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 than your country.
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 occupation, you can
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 or realise which job is comfortable for you. In conclusion, some people want to keep doing certain work, and
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practicing
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. In my
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 people should do both of them in moderation.
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