Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

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Several

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admire to try innovations as to be in new lands and taste different food from

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places

while some

people

are selecting to carry on regular

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that they well know. In my opinion,

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has advantages and disadvantages which will discuss below.

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trip

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to new locations and

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new types of foods. As we know, most of us try to make true

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dreams about

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around the world to acquaint with new

people

and taste anything that they have never eaten anywhere. So by visiting unknown spaces they can get relaxation and learn aborigine's traditions. And some

people

travel to new

places

to discover new tastes that they never see them. In my view, being in

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places

, everyone can get an opportunity to get know about new nations and exchange their experiences about

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and something about foods, especially dishes receipts from other

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. It needs to be said about

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sides of it. Most

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people

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prefer to stay at home

instead

of trying new

things

like travelling and getting to know new tastes.

However

, these actions of

people

have their reasons. The

first

of them is that some

people

do not like to change anything in

thier

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their

lifestyle so they prefer to ignore

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. In my opinion, it is normal but I think everyone needs to try new

things

. In

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conclusion

, we can say that by trying something new

people

have a chance to know more than doing nothing in familiar

places

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Fully explain your ideas

Some people believe that professional athletes serve as positive role models for young people, while others argue that their behaviour both on and off the field, can have negative influences. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

some people feel that free time is something valuable.

Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause various health problems.

The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuels. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is sometimes considered that school education should be paid attention to academic subjects, which would be useful for their future careers, but I think some personʼs decision should be appreciated who has a talent for acting and wish subjects like music and sport .