The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the situation of Grange
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in the past and present. Plenty of differences could be seen through the map. In
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1920, the are three rose
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garden
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the visitor who
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on flowers
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every side. The fountain
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found in the middle of the
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and that was so
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. in the right beside the
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, people could see the glasshouse and it
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, the Grange
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now is
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stunning with the full of
rose
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in the middle of the park. In
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, the playground
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located
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the right side of the corner beside the cafe. despite, the condition is more modern for
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being
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on
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eof
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the fascinating place in the city. The large venue for the concert
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available for the visitor who wants to enjoy their time by listening to the music or instrument.
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, the entrance is moved
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the right side near the water feature. In conclusion, many features that
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modified to make
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is more interested
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people who are coming to
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place.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • alterations
  • renovations
  • modernize
  • upgraded
  • transformed
  • landscaping
  • facilities
  • amenities
  • preservation
  • heritage
  • green spaces
  • eco-friendly
  • public space
  • community impact
  • historical elements
  • conservation
  • recreational areas
  • urban planning
  • sustainable development
  • layout
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