The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the picture
compare
the situation of Grange Change the verb form
compares
garden
in the past and present. Plenty of differences could be seen through the map. In Use synonyms
the
1920, the are three rose Change the article
apply
Use synonyms
garden
Fix the agreement mistake
gardens
satisfy
the visitor who Wrong verb form
satisfied
Add a missing verb
was keen
keen
on flowers Change the verb form
keens
in
every side. The fountain Change preposition
on
also
Linking Words
be
found in the middle of the Change the verb form
is
garden
and that was so Use synonyms
beatiful
Correct your spelling
beautiful
secenery
. in the right beside the Correct your spelling
scenery
entrace
of the Correct your spelling
entrance
garden
, people could see the glasshouse and it Use synonyms
ccan
not be found today. Correct your spelling
can
However
, the Grange Linking Words
garden
now is Use synonyms
also
stunning with the full of Linking Words
rose
Add an article
the rose
a rose
garden
in the middle of the park. In Use synonyms
additional
, the playground Replace the word
addition
Linking Words
also
located Add a missing verb
is also
in
the right side of the corner beside the cafe. despite, the condition is more modern for Change preposition
on
this
time, it Linking Words
still
Add a missing verb
is still
being
Change the form of the verb
is
on
Correct your spelling
one
eof
the fascinating place in the city. The large venue for the concert Correct your spelling
of
Linking Words
also
available for the visitor who wants to enjoy their time by listening to the music or instrument. Add a missing verb
is also
Moreover
, the entrance is moved Linking Words
in
the right side near the water feature. In conclusion, many features that Change preposition
to
was
modified to make Change the verb form
were
this
Linking Words
garden
is more interested Use synonyms
for
people who are coming to Change the preposition
in
this
place.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite