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As most people spend a major part of their adults life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

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In the modern world, most adults have
fulltime
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job
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jobs
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 and work to support
live
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life
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 costs and their sense of
fulfillment
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fulfilment
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, so
job
 satisfaction is a
principle
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principal
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 element of individual welfare.
This
 essay will discuss
about
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three factors
which
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that
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 lead to
job
 content and realistic that for all workers. Possibly, there are three major factors
which
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that
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 contribute to
job
 comfort.
Firstly
, people tend to have a
job
 that
generate
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 to
sense
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a sense
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 of
valuable
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 and it is so essential for them. If they
accepted
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from
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 their boss, they would have
job
 pleasure. The other factor is progression
also
, people need to improve their skills and talents and should to provide situations which they can learn new things and level up in their
job
.
On the other hand
, employers choose that works have
superb
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the superb
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salary
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salaries
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 to support living costs.
For example
, international and large companies pay rise regularly.
Consequently
, workers have satisfied there. Of course, it is not possible for all employers the great opportunities to have suitable work.
In addition
, always
job
 offers are limited with many competition
however
, people should update their information and improve their skills to achieve a superb
situations
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 and
consequently
,
job
 satisfaction.
On
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 conclusion, there are many factors to have
job
fulfillment
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 and feel welfare but it is not possible for all workers and opportunities are limited in today's competitive world.
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