Some employers are giving more value on hiring people with good social skills apart from good qualifications. Do you agree or disagree that social skills are just as crucial as good qualifications for success at work? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

There is a high demand for hiring those who have
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excellent social
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as
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great
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several companies. I mostly agree with
this
statement because both
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skills
are important for
employers
: the former can be considered as a
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who
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a more transformable ability toward a variety of
tasks
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later
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can be recognized as a
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a more specific ability to finish specialized
tasks
. Most
employers
have a tendency to prefer
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an employee who can complete various
tasks
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specialized
skills
.
This
is because basically, there is no
company
where employees take only
work
which is familiar by themselves.
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, those who have one of the common transformable
skills
such
as communication
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to finish their
tasks
perfectly by asking
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or method to solve a faced problem to their colleagues even if they are required to complete complicated
work
which is unfamiliar. It can be
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benefit
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for
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an employer
the employer
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employer
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to employ
people
who can cope with a wide range
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task
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tasks
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.
On the other hand
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qualification are needed by
employers
for dealing with a certain specialized task.
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, if
employer
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can not hire these kinds of
people
based on their
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of
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company
, it is impossible to cope with specific
work
like a construction project, financial consultant project and some mental health conductions. It leads to the situation where a
company
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not make any profits in their
work
, which can
also
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bankrupt
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.
Therefore
,
people
with
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good
qualification
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qualifications
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have a pivotal role in a certain
company
. In conclusion, it is worth for
employers
hiring both of types’
people
such
as
people
with good social
skills
and good qualifications because of completing
work
of their companies.
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