Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others however believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Crime has become an acute issue today, with the advancement of science and technology

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society has become corrupted and, the

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rate has up surged

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a large scale. To tackle

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, a section suggests longer

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terms while others believe that alternative measures are the best way to mitigate crimes. Poverty and ignorance are the key main factors

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lead one’s mind

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criminal activities. According to some people, the best solution is to lock criminals up for longer, keeping society out of danger.

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is the method used by most countries today. Since they believe that, punishing offenders with longer

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to invoke fear among other criminals. Because if a is already aware of the intensity of punishment before committing any, it will deter him to do an illegal act. According to

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points of view,

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is not a deterrent for most forms of offending. Because after they are released, society tends to judge released prisoners more harshly, before they went to

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. So

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situation encourages them to think

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illegal activities again and again.

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of extending imprisonment; prisoner’s

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and attitudes should be reformed against reoffending after

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released

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counseling

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programs, meditation programs and skill development workshops as well. In my view, I agree the alternative measures, would be more effective rather than

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long term

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in most situations. The best way to tackle

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complication is,

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good command of education. For

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example, in Sweden

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is for everyone and

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authority is facilitating more employment opportunities,

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Sweden tops the list of peaceful countries. In conclusion,

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up un societies for a long time, seem to be the best way to mitigate the crime level; it is not the exact solution for the problem.

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governments have to

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for search the root cause and

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it, in order to create a peaceful world.