In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

Many people believe that having
house
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or
apartment
is a must than renting one. In my opinion, it can be
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perception but it depends on the circumstances
that
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involve in that condition.
Firstly
,
house
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a house
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or
apartment
is an investment for living. When people are getting older, they are trying to ensure their life by buying
home
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, so that they can gather with their family. They are not worried about retiring because at least, they have a place to stay. Sometimes, the price of property can increase because of the location, the environment, the function and the need. So in the
future
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they can sell it and move to the other one that has
cheaper
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a cheaper
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price. The perception is supported by
old
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the old
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perspective that usually
exist
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in our environment.
Secondly
,
house
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a house
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or
apartment
can be expensive, even costly to the budget. Since the property available decreased is happening, people are getting worried not to get their
home
. The demand
of
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owning
home
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a home
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significantly increase the price. Perception of owning
home
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a home
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becomes
bias
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without calculating
for
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apply
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our
need
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. It can be worse if they are not living in that
home
whereas
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they
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the
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they
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still need money for
maintaining
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maintenance
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such
as tax, the pipe of water, checking the roof, cleaning the
home
, cutting the grass (if they have a space land) and so on. The expense will become bigger without
they
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them
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take
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taking
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advantage of it. So, with the best calculation of buying the
house
or
apartment
is not worth it
anymore
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any more
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than renting it.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial commitment
  • down payment
  • initial costs
  • allocate resources
  • maintenance costs
  • mobility
  • relocate
  • market fluctuations
  • property value
  • building equity
  • appreciate in value
  • asset
  • personalization
  • restrictions
  • rental increases
  • lease renewal
  • financial instability
  • housing budgets
  • long-term security
  • landlord
  • lease agreement
  • equity
  • substantial
  • property ownership
  • property market
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