In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

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Many people believe that having

house

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apartment

is a must than renting one. In my opinion, it can be

good

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a good

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perception but it depends on the circumstances

that

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apply

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involve in that condition.

Firstly

house

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a house

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apartment

is an investment for living. When people are getting older, they are trying to ensure their life by buying

home

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, so that they can gather with their family. They are not worried about retiring because at least, they have a place to stay. Sometimes, the price of property can increase because of the location, the environment, the function and the need. So in the

future

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they can sell it and move to the other one that has

cheaper

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a cheaper

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price. The perception is supported by

old

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perspective that usually

exist

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in our environment.

Secondly

house

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a house

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apartment

can be expensive, even costly to the budget. Since the property available decreased is happening, people are getting worried not to get their

home

. The demand

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owning

home

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a home

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significantly increase the price. Perception of owning

home

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a home

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becomes

bias

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without calculating

for

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our

need

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. It can be worse if they are not living in that

home

whereas

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they

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the

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they

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still need money for

maintaining

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maintenance

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such

as tax, the pipe of water, checking the roof, cleaning the

home

, cutting the grass (if they have a space land) and so on. The expense will become bigger without

they

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them

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take

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advantage of it. So, with the best calculation of buying the

house

apartment

is not worth it

anymore

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any more

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than renting it.

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

Fully explain your ideas

An increasing number of developing countries are expanding tourist industries. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last years. Discuss the causes and effect of this issue disturbing trend.

The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuels. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – Describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.