You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays there is much controversy over the most potent party that can save our environment. It is being argued that the government and big companies are two sheer ones that can do it and there is nothing that ordinary people can do about it.
Although
these two organizations are playing an increasingly important role, I am not completely in agreement with the above-said view. I will discuss two reasons that I believe individuals can
also
play a great role to protect our nature.
First
, obligations that are imposed by authorities would not improve the situation unless people were obeying them. To illustrate, The government and companies have been providing various frameworks in the context of waste disposal which will not be feasible unless employees do them. Whereas putting
this
responsibility on the shoulder of countries' leaders might be preferable to taking action ourselves, it suffers from the disadvantages that may result in systematic failure.
Second
, improving the environment might not be the priority of some countries' leaders. Saving the world had been always viewed as a goal for administrations but
unfortunately
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some of them are taking a fresh look at it and even are denying man-made destructions.
For example
, President Trump was
denying
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global warming
through
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his leadership period.
Consequently
, he did not specify
budget
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a budget
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for solving
this
disaster. If individual people do not interfere,
this
predicament will be irreversible. To sum up, I disagree with the view that says the government is able to save the world alone.
On the contrary
, helping the Earth to thrive
not
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only is
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authorities
authorites'
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responsibility but
also
each resident has a duty. Countries' administrations and large companies' plans will not be plausible without
everyone
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everyone's
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cooporation
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cooperation
corporation
.
In addition
, our leaders are neglecting
this
vital issue in some situations;
hence
, we need to take action.
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