You have recently shifted in a rental apartment with your family. However, there are some problems with the apartment. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter.  Describe the problem  Demand the solution for the problem  Inform him what you will do if the problem is not solved.

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Dear sir, I am
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forwarding
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letter to into your notice recently I move in
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your rental property but I face some problems. My name is XYX and I
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month I shifted to your rental flat 23nubr steel north with my family but
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face some problems like parking is to short some time
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late come back home and parking not available because you already mention about parking into papers bit now car area not free . Another side your society members too much noise and
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am disturbed so please set
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problem and I am already trying to solve it but
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am not mange . I hope you notice my letter and reply
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soon and give me any suggestions about
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so call my number. Your, Truly.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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