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Because many children are not able to learn foreign languages, schools should not force them to learn foreign languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#children #languages #schools #force
Nowadays, you can see many young
children
 who can speak foreign
languages
 very easily on radio, TV even SNS. Some people say that
children
’s brain is just like a sponge so it is a perfect time to learn
foreign
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a foreign
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 language at
school
in
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at
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 young age.
However
, I do not think it is a good idea for them to
study
 foreign
languages
 in
school
. Schools should focus on teaching
children
 a wide
of
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variety not just
leaning
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learning
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 foreign
languages
.
Children
 can experience many things (in)directly in
school
 and teachers should guide them to feel and learn by doing many things of their own choice not just sitting at the desk all day and
study
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 foreign
languages
 without
a
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consideration of
children
’s
interest
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. If schools keep forcing young
children
 to learn foreign
languages
, it can cause severe side effects. Many parents who are enthusiastic
their
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children
’s
study
 ability or capability bring their
children
 to the private foreign language
school
 to improve their skills
then
 the gap of
study
 result between students who learn and don’t will be huge. Learning foreign
languages
 is not
a
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 easy thing even for adults. It can bring loads of
study
 stress and fatigue so that they might feel a sense of frustration when
study
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studying
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. As I demonstrated, learning new things including foreign
languages
 should not be a burden to students
especially
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 young
children
. It is necessary to learn foreign
languages
 in
modern
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a modern
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 globalized society,
however
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 schools must not persuade young students to practice foreign
languages
with
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only for
this
 reason.
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