Some people believe that university education should focus on the skills of employment for the future. Others think that university education should focus on academic study only. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It’s true that people hold different views about what

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education should focus on.An advice that the

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have

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to emphasize on the working

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becomes more and more common these years.

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, I think that

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working

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and academic

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are

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important in the

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. On one hand, the

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of employment benefit the students who can get good salary jobs easily, since they have gained the knowledge of working in the

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and can undertake tasks as soon as they are employed in companies. What’s more, if the

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emphasize

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on

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working

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, the enterprises would be the big winners. They can employ a large number of qualified new workers easily and cut the budge on

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training

before working

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because the

graduaters

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graduates

are fulfilled with working

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before

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leave the

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.

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academic

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helps students understand better

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technology . Nowadays,

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technology develops so quickly, Only the workers who gain

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academic knowledge, can acquire the newest working

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as soon as possible. Without

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academic foundation,

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the worker

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worker

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would find

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to accept the new

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and keep pace with the faster and faster development of working

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. Take the job in

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instance, the world economy changes a lot these decades, the worker can not understand the new business

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without the

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of economics in the

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, and it’s difficult for him to gain the knowledge after busy working time. In conclusion, the career life would be thirty or even longer

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, students need be prepared with both the

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of

emplyment

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employment

and the academic

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in

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.