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Some people believe that university education should focus on the skills of employment for the future. Others think that university education should focus on academic study only. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #university #education #focus #skills #employment #future #study
It’s true that people hold different views about what
the
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university
 education should focus on.An advice that the
university
have
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 to emphasize on the working
skills
 becomes more and more common these years.
However
, I think that
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working
skills
 and academic
study
 are
equal
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 important in the
university
. On one hand, the
skills
 of employment benefit the students who can get good salary jobs easily, since they have gained the knowledge of working in the
university
 and can undertake tasks as soon as they are employed in companies. What’s more, if the
university
emphasize
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on
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apply
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the
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working
skills
, the enterprises would be the big winners. They can employ a large number of qualified new workers easily and cut the budge on
trainning
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training
 before working
,
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 because the
graduaters
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graduates
 are fulfilled with working
skills
 before
the
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they
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 leave the
university
.
On the other hand
,
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academic
study
 helps students understand better
about
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the
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technology . Nowadays,
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technology develops so quickly, Only the workers who gain
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academic knowledge, can acquire the newest working
skills
 as soon as possible. Without
steady
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 academic foundation,
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the worker
a worker
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worker
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workers
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 would find
hard
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it hard
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 to accept the new
skills
 and keep pace with the faster and faster development of working
skills
. Take the job in
bank
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for
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,for
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 instance, the world economy changes a lot these decades, the worker can not understand the new business
mode
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model
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 without the
study
 of economics in the
university
, and it’s difficult for him to gain the knowledge after busy working time. In conclusion, the career life would be thirty or even longer
life time
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lifetime
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, students need be prepared with both the
skills
 of
emplyment
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employment
 and the academic
study
 in
university
.
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