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Some employers are giving more value on hiring people with good social skills apart from good qualifications. Do you agree or disagree that social skills are just as crucial as good qualifications for success at work? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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There is a high demand for hiring those who have excellent social
skills
 as great qualificators in several companies. I mostly agree with
this
 statement because both
skills
 are important for
employers
: the former can be considered as a person who has a more transformable ability toward a variety of
tasks
 and the latter can be recognized as a person who has a more specific ability to finish specialized
tasks
. Most
employers
 have a tendency to prefer an employee who can complete various
tasks
 regardless of his specialized
skills
.
This
 is because basically, there is no
company
 where employees take only
work
 which is familiar by themselves.
For example
, those who have one of the common transformable
skills
such
 as communication
skills
 are a possibility to finish their
tasks
 perfectly by asking advice or method to solve a faced problem to their colleagues even if they are required to complete complicated
work
 which is unfamiliar. It can be beneficial for
employers
 to employ
people
 who can cope with a wide range of
tasks
.
On the other hand
, holders of qualifications are needed by
employers
 for dealing with a certain specialized task.
For instance
, if an employer can not hire these kinds of
people
 based on their type of
company
, it is impossible to cope with specific
work
 like a construction project, financial consultant project and some mental health conductions. It leads to the situation where a
company
 can do not make any profits in their
work
, which can
also
 bring bankruptcy.
Therefore
,
people
 with good qualifications have a pivotal role in a certain
company
. In conclusion, it is worth for
employers
 hiring both of types’
people
such
 as
people
 with good social
skills
 and good qualifications because of completing
work
 of their companies.
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