Do some films encourage criminal behaviour? Do you agree or disagree?

It is generally believed that some
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and
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have the full potential to motivate
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audience
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the audience
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to commit criminal
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such
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as murder. One may get
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what they watch on the television and manipulate the mindset of the
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. From my point of view, I agree that some
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and
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encourage criminal
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for some
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audience
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.
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is due to the fact that they find the scenes as "cool". In
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reasons
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why some
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and
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encourage
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behaviours
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with, young children may be
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a risky position. When they are young, they tend to get easily influenced by what they see, and
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can have a lasting impact on the way they look at things.
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is especially dangerous for young children who are being exposed to watch scenes
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involve criminal
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at a young age.
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, in Kolkata, there was an infamous case of a school girl murdering her classmate using a plastic bag which she
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confessed has learnt from a crime
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she has been following.
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, it is imperative for parents to not expose their kids to
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too
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films
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or
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that showcases a lot of criminal
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, as
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could lead influence them in a wrong way.
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, it is advisable for parents to educate their children about good
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and what are the consequences that they could potentially face if they commit crimes. In conclusion, I believe that some
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and
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could influence
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audience
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the audience
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to develop
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criminal
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in the future.
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, if there are many
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and
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showcase
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that showcase
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criminal
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, the possibility of crime rates would increase.

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