Some people work for the same organization all their life. Others think that it is better towork for different organizations. Discuss both thiese views and give your own opinion.

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Taking up a career in a given company can be a lifelong decision. While some
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prefer remaining in a particular firm till retirement, other
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enjoy changing their jobs.
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career could be faster when employees remain committed to the office they work in, I agree with the viewpoint that labour mobility will help
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to gain experience from different situations for future endeavours. Some
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choose to stay in a particular firm till they retire from service. They often talk of the need to rise in
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rank as fast as possible as the main reason.
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, others say they are not ready to trade their friendship for another job. Taken together, they trust that remaining loyal to the employer could earn one some recognition; a step to promotion to
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level.
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accomplished and happy by staying around an organization whose goal and vision
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suits their life aspiration.
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, it takes years of
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to rise to the rank of a director in the civil service, but with selfless service, some workers have enjoyed rapid promotion within a short span of years.
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, I think it is encouraging for public sector workers to think of migrating from one job to another.
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is because working in different
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exposes
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to learning from many leaders who are unique in their problem-solving skills.
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, interns will be able to understand the values which drive a business to success
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and could adopt
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approach in growing their own business in the future. A good example is the story of a colleague who went into pharmaceuticals. He told me that his success story is born out of the experience he got from working in a couple of companies by applying their work ethics to his business. In conclusion, having a career is the dream of many
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. While some
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stay in a job for life in order to rise to the zenith, other persons like changing their jobs to gain exposure that will be used for their future industry.
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, I support the
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for labour mobility.
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