Some people work for the same organization all their life. Others think that it is better towork for different organizations. Discuss both thiese views and give your own opinion.
Taking up a career in a given company can be a lifelong decision. While some
people
prefer remaining in a particular firm till retirement, other people
enjoy changing their jobs. Although
rising to the peak of ones
career could be faster when employees remain committed to the office they work in, I agree with the viewpoint that labour mobility will help Change to a genitive case
one's
staffs
to gain experience from different situations for future endeavours.
Some Fix the agreement mistake
staff
people
choose to stay in a particular firm till they retire from service. They often talk of the need to rise in the
rank as fast as possible as the main reason. Correct article usage
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In addition
, others say they are not ready to trade their friendship for another job. Taken together, they trust that remaining loyal to the employer could earn one some recognition; a step to promotion to higher
level.Add an article
a higher
Consequently
committed staffs
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staff
feel
accomplished and happy by staying around an organization whose goal and vision Add the particle
to feel
also
suits their life aspiration. For example
, it takes years of hardwork
to rise to the rank of a director in the civil service, but with selfless service, some workers have enjoyed rapid promotion within a short span of years.
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hard work
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On the contrary
, I think it is encouraging for public sector workers to think of migrating from one job to another. This
is because working in different outfit
exposes Fix the agreement mistake
outfits
peolple
to learning from many leaders who are unique in their problem-solving skills. Correct your spelling
people
As a result
, interns will be able to understand the values which drive a business to success,
and could adopt Remove the comma
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similar
approach in growing their own business in the future. A good example is the story of a colleague who went into pharmaceuticals. He told me that his success story is born out of the experience he got from working in a couple of companies by applying their work ethics to his business.
In conclusion, having a career is the dream of many Add an article
a similar
people
. While some people
stay in a job for life in order to rise to the zenith, other persons like changing their jobs to gain exposure that will be used for their future industry. Consequently
, I support the arguement
for labour mobility.Correct your spelling
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