Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas, now many suffer loneliness and health problems. What are the cause for this and what are some solutions?
Music
is probably one thing that could merge people
in various cultures and generations together. From my point of view, I strongly agree with this
statement and I will give reasons in the essay below.
Regarding the first
, there is no boundary for music
, simply because, music
or performing all over the world show a big range of music
styles which rely on culture, location or language. However
, everyone
is able to enjoy the beauty of music
from melody, rhythm without language knowledge. For example
, I and my friends love listening to Japanese song
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songs
cartoon
in Japanese style, even we do not understand the meaning but we are still happy and dance while listening to the Fix the agreement mistake
cartoons
song
which impacts our feeling.
According to this
idea, another best example is everyone
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from different countries do not speak only in
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this
song
brings everyone
to celebrate a birthday party.
Another reason I hold this
view, music
is similar to fashion. Some one-hit wonder
songs are still on Add a hyphen
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air
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on
radio
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the radio
internet
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the internet
also
launches in remastered or covered versions. People
in different generations enjoy the same song
in the
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For instance
, The Beatles, an English rock band which popular in ’70s
, I am happy to Change the article
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listen
their whole album all day and sing along with my parents, as they are a big Add the preposition
tolisten
fan
of The Beatles when they are a teenager.
In conclusion, I definitely believe that the variety of Fix the agreement mistake
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music
is valuable for everyone
, no matter where there are in the corner of the world or which age they are, young, mature or elder. The majority of people
understand and enjoy music
which is a universal interesting art piece from their experience. Music
connects people
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...