Some people say that it’s better to teach language students in small classes, whereas others think the number of people does not matter. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Most of the biggest There are some convincing arguments in
favor
of the restriction of ownership. Change the spelling
favour
Firstly
, the most important reason
is that it is approved by the scientists that there is interaction
between the radio wave emission from mobile Add an article
the interaction
an interaction
phones
and a
sensitives equipment in Correct article usage
apply
the
hospitals and air plans, Correct article usage
apply
therefore
mobile phones
need to be forbidden in those places
and to be ensure
that the visitors and the employees Change the verb form
ensure
are focus
about their presence in those Change the verb form
focus
places
either of using the mobile phone
. A further
Reason
in
the Change preposition
apply
using
of mobile Replace the word
use
phone
more
than two hours per day Change preposition
for more
impacted
the quality of Wrong verb form
impacts
live
and reduce the social life of Replace the word
life
the
people, a good example of Correct article usage
apply
this
the
non-using of mobile in the cinema, Add a missing verb
is the
restaurant
. And, Correct word choice
and restaurant
also
in the
schools and Correct article usage
apply
university
. In that Fix the agreement mistake
universities
case
we will be more Add a comma
case,
focus
Replace the word
focused
about
Change preposition
on
the
Correct article usage
apply
real life
instated of Add a hyphen
real-life
the
mobile Correct article usage
apply
phones
. A final reason
is the
several car accidents Correct determiner usage
that
had
been noticed recently caused by the utilization of the mobile Wrong verb form
have
phone
,
since Remove the comma
apply
it
had been used Correct pronoun usage
apply
while
driving. It is generally agreed that such
measures of restriction,
would reduce the number of Remove the comma
apply
traffic
accidents caused by people taking on their mobile phone
. To summery, I believe that some restriction of ownership mobile
Change preposition
of mobile
phones
needs to be applicated
to Verb problem
applied
protects
young children and those who are in sensible Wrong verb form
protect
places
, like hospital
and cars. Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
However
, we need to raise awareness of the danger of the
using Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
this
recent technique. cities
in the world are becoming a black hole of pollution and traffic
, which directly affect the time spent to go
to work and the health of the employees. A courageous decision needs to be taken to reduce the pressure in the centres of the city by prohibiting the private from entering those Change the verb form
going
places
. For many reasons, I believe this
is the best solution to have a better image of the cities
. The most important reason
is pollution from cars and motorcycles, which impact the quality of the
life in the Correct article usage
apply
cities
, especially those with a big population such
as Paris, London, and Madrid. The major problem that has been confirmed by the studies Is that Pollutants from cars can cause a range of health problems, from allergies and skin irritation to heart disease and respiratory problems such
as asthma. Furthermore
, Long-term repeated exposure to diesel exhaust fumes may also
increase the risk of lung cancer, according to
the World Health Organization. A second reason
is that some of those cities
are not designed for motor traffic
, so they cannot withstand the pressure of traffic
. a huge number of car accidents had been registered. Finally
, I believe cities
should be car-free because pollution needs to be stopped. As a solution, we need to choose to drive when our destination is only a block away. We can use different forms of transportation instead
, such
as bicycles and buses. In conclusion, therefore
, I strongly support the idea that traffic
should be banned from the city centers
, as Change the spelling
centres
this
would enable people to rediscover cities
as pleasant and healthy places
to live as possible.Submitted by aitmimi.hamsa on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion