Some people say that it’s better to teach language students in small classes, whereas others think the number of people does not matter. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Most of the biggest There are some convincing arguments in
favor
of the restriction of ownership. Change the spelling
favour
Firstly
, the most important Linking Words
reason
is that it is approved by the scientists that there is Use synonyms
interaction
between the radio wave emission from mobile Add an article
the interaction
an interaction
phones
and Use synonyms
a
sensitives equipment in Correct article usage
apply
the
hospitals and air plans, Correct article usage
apply
therefore
mobile Linking Words
phones
need to be forbidden in those Use synonyms
places
and to Use synonyms
be ensure
that the visitors and the employees Change the verb form
ensure
are focus
about their presence in those Change the verb form
focus
places
either of using the mobile Use synonyms
phone
. A Use synonyms
further
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Reason
Use synonyms
in
the Change preposition
apply
using
of mobile Replace the word
use
phone
Use synonyms
more
than two hours per day Change preposition
for more
impacted
the quality of Wrong verb form
impacts
live
and reduce the social life of Replace the word
life
the
people, a good example of Correct article usage
apply
this
Linking Words
the
non-using of mobile in the cinema, Add a missing verb
is the
restaurant
. And, Correct word choice
and restaurant
also
in Linking Words
the
schools and Correct article usage
apply
university
. In that Fix the agreement mistake
universities
case
we will be more Add a comma
case,
focus
Replace the word
focused
about
Change preposition
on
the
Correct article usage
apply
real life
instated of Add a hyphen
real-life
the
mobile Correct article usage
apply
phones
. A final Use synonyms
reason
is Use synonyms
the
several car accidents Correct determiner usage
that
had
been noticed recently caused by the utilization of the mobile Wrong verb form
have
phone
Use synonyms
,
since Remove the comma
apply
it
had been used Correct pronoun usage
apply
while
driving. It is generally agreed that Linking Words
such
measures of restrictionLinking Words
,
would reduce the number of Remove the comma
apply
traffic
accidents caused by people taking on their mobile Use synonyms
phone
. To summery, I believe that some restriction of ownership Use synonyms
mobile
Change preposition
of mobile
phones
needs to be Use synonyms
applicated
to Verb problem
applied
protects
young children and those who are in sensible Wrong verb form
protect
places
, like Use synonyms
hospital
and cars. Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
However
, we need to raise awareness of the danger of Linking Words
the
using Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
this
recent technique. Linking Words
cities
in the world are becoming a black hole of pollution and Use synonyms
traffic
, which directly affect the time spent Use synonyms
to go
to work and the health of the employees. A courageous decision needs to be taken to reduce the pressure in the centres of the city by prohibiting the private from entering those Change the verb form
going
places
. For many reasons, I believe Use synonyms
this
is the best solution to have a better image of the Linking Words
cities
. The most important Use synonyms
reason
is pollution from cars and motorcycles, which impact the quality of Use synonyms
the
life in the Correct article usage
apply
cities
, especially those with a big population Use synonyms
such
as Paris, London, and Madrid. The major problem that has been confirmed by the studies Is that Pollutants from cars can cause a range of health problems, from allergies and skin irritation to heart disease and respiratory problems Linking Words
such
as asthma. Linking Words
Furthermore
, Long-term repeated exposure to diesel exhaust fumes may Linking Words
also
increase the risk of lung cancer, Linking Words
according to
the World Health Organization. A second Linking Words
reason
is that some of those Use synonyms
cities
are not designed for motor Use synonyms
traffic
, so they cannot withstand the pressure of Use synonyms
traffic
. a huge number of car accidents had been registered. Use synonyms
Finally
, I believe Linking Words
cities
should be car-free because pollution needs to be stopped. As a solution, we need to choose to drive when our destination is only a block away. We can use different forms of transportation Use synonyms
instead
, Linking Words
such
as bicycles and buses. In conclusion, Linking Words
therefore
, I strongly support the idea that Linking Words
traffic
should be banned from the city Use synonyms
centers
, as Change the spelling
centres
this
would enable people to rediscover Linking Words
cities
as pleasant and healthy Use synonyms
places
to live as possible.Use synonyms
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