Some people say that it’s better to teach language students in small classes, whereas others think the number of people does not matter. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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between the radio wave emission from mobile
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sensitives equipment in
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hospitals and air plans,
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mobile
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need to be forbidden in those
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that the visitors and the employees
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about their presence in those
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either of using the mobile
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of mobile
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than two hours per day
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the quality of
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people, a good example of
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non-using of mobile in the cinema,
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schools and
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we will be more
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real life
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mobile
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several car accidents
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been noticed recently caused by the utilization of the mobile
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since
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had been used
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driving. It is generally agreed that
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measures of restriction
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would reduce the number of
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accidents caused by people taking on their mobile
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. To summery, I believe that some restriction of ownership
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phones
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needs to be
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to
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young children and those who are in sensible
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, like
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and cars.
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, we need to raise awareness of the danger of
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using
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recent technique.
cities
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in the world are becoming a black hole of pollution and
traffic
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, which directly affect the time spent
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to work and the health of the employees. A courageous decision needs to be taken to reduce the pressure in the centres of the city by prohibiting the private from entering those
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. For many reasons, I believe
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is the best solution to have a better image of the
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. The most important
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is pollution from cars and motorcycles, which impact the quality of
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life in the
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, especially those with a big population
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as Paris, London, and Madrid. The major problem that has been confirmed by the studies Is that Pollutants from cars can cause a range of health problems, from allergies and skin irritation to heart disease and respiratory problems
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as asthma.
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, Long-term repeated exposure to diesel exhaust fumes may
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increase the risk of lung cancer,
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the World Health Organization. A second
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is that some of those
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are not designed for motor
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, so they cannot withstand the pressure of
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. a huge number of car accidents had been registered.
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, I believe
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should be car-free because pollution needs to be stopped. As a solution, we need to choose to drive when our destination is only a block away. We can use different forms of transportation
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,
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as bicycles and buses. In conclusion,
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, I strongly support the idea that
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should be banned from the city
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, as
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would enable people to rediscover
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as pleasant and healthy
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to live as possible.
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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  • tailored feedback
  • individual learning experiences
  • active participation
  • engage in discussions
  • speaking and comprehension skills
  • foster a closer community
  • supportive environment
  • diverse perspectives
  • enrich the learning experience
  • independent and self-reliant
  • take charge of their own learning
  • innovative teaching methods
  • language acquisition
  • effective use of technology
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