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Covid-19 may be a catastrophe for human beings, but a therapy for Mother Nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

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The public had suffered from a coronavirus crash in the year 2019.
On the other hand
 trees and mountains recovered from pollution in many areas like north-pole,south-pole and Amazon forests
Firstly
, there are many fatalities that occurred after the eruption of the deadly virus in 2019. Many communities lost their jobs and homes in the pandemic.
For example
, the community work as a labour in other states and society work in different states, staying away from their family lost their accommodation provided by the company due to shortage of money in the pandemic situation. It caused a huge loss to the human race.
On the other hand
,
this
 type of out-break helped nature to cure itself by isolating places like mountains, rivers and thick forests.
For instance
, after the uprising of the virus government-imposed lockdown for 4 months in every country and imposed fines on the nation who appeared outside their houses without proper masks, by imposing a lockdown many populations limited visiting places and stopped the usage of cars. Due to ,
this
 the pollution levels reduced and the ozone layer started healing itself. All in all, the virus disruption caused some problems and some benefits where the advantages out weight the disadvantage.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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