You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. More and more people are buying food that is ready to eat rather than choosing to eat home-cooked food. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In
this
modern scenario,many individuals are consuming outside nourishment which involved less work rather than home-made
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a home-made
the home-made
item
.Fix the agreement mistake
items
This
is due to they do not have enough time
to get prepare bread at residence as their busy schedules.This
essay will discuss both merits and demerits to
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of
this
phenomenon.
To embark on,these days,the advancement in technology has made people
life easier compared to the past.Change noun form
people's
Firstly
,the public is ordering nourishment just sit a home through the internet using some delivery apps such
as Zomato and Swiggy.Consequently
,this
will result in saving time
especially
it is beneficial for employees.Add the comma(s)
,especially
For instance
,employees do not get much time
to cook food
at their homes,therefore
at that time
,these apps will helps
them to order bread Change the verb form
help
what
they want.Correct word choice
that
secondly
,As a matter of fact,the taste of food
is very delicious compared to home-made food
.
On another hand,consuming bread outside has a tremendous negative influence on the public.Initially
,junk food
is comprised with
a lot of fats and carbs.Change preposition
of
As a result
,it might effects
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effect
on
our health issues Change preposition
apply
such
as the
obesity as well as Correct article usage
apply
the
heart diseases.Correct article usage
apply
For example
,according to the world health organisation,the main reason for getting fat is consuming a lot of food
which is available on
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in
the
restaurants because it contains high cholesterol levels.Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
,it involves with
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apply
a higher prices
compared to home-made nourishment as they include all charges like GST and service fee.Correct the article-noun agreement
higher prices
a higher price
Furthermore
,if people want to consume outside they should walk or commute to another place where they want to eat.
To conclude,every coin has both sides.Although
this
phenomenon has advantages,there are also
some demerits,but the cons are higher Correct your spelling
than
that
the prons which are Correct your spelling
than
time consuming
and delicious Add a hyphen
time-consuming
food
.In contrast
,the cons are unhealthy,expensive and commute to other places.Submitted by anushachenna15 on
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