Your friend recently moved to the same town where you live. Please write a letter to invite your friend to go to the gym together. In your letter describe why you go to this gym say what part of this gym you recommend explain why you think it is suitable for your friend

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Dear Sarah, Delighted to receive your letters! It has been a while since you wrote to me, I am glad to hear that you and your family are well. I am excited to know that you are moved to south London recently. You are almost within walkable distance from my apartment. I Hope, you have settled down peacefully at your home. I know you are still interested in keeping yourself fit and I have the perfect location to suggest practising your fitness activities. I have been a member of the La Marina Club for a while now. As, it is a multi-facility gym with options for swimming, sauna and outdoor games. Specifically, I would like you to try the steam room at the club, which is exceptional and the service in

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since you can drop in at any point of time between 4 AM to 11 PM to utilize the facilities.

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if you are interested in joining me at the gym. With lots of love, Surya

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