Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant examples and experiences you might have

In

this

modern era, a lot of training programs related to parenting studies are provided by governments, communities, and other organizations that are truly useful for parents in controlling their

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to be better than before.

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, men and women have a massive performance to arrange their household, including all things involved in it.

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,

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essay will argue that female (called mother) has a propensity

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increasing their

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and daughters

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social attitude. At

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point, in Indonesia,

according to

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results carried out by

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way about scion's preference

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parenting, many young people tend to appreciate a woman's character as a household chairman for the reason that man has additional responsibility in other conditions,

for instance

, working to earn money, managing farm-land to increase agricultural productivity, and doing all stuff held outside home.

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birth-time until the growth of

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, 'mothers' are deeply kept in touch with their offspring

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giving a piece

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joke, providing toys, and helping them to understand a little bit about information.

On the other hand

, the part of males

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the home, as far as I know, is less than

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. Many 'Fathers' are involved in technical

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, not in teaching form, and they just focus on giving inspiration and motivation undirectly. Alternatively, a man mostly

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not care about parenting insights because they think they can put

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skills through their experiences. Obviously, Obama, the former president of the USA, just

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on his work sector, and he has been saying that he does not have much time to control house chores, especially scion's problems.

Finally

, to summarize, women have a

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portrayal of parenting

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than a man in terms of home responsibility.

Hence

, people's busyness and errands took a part in learning and

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provided for the young.