The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples.

The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples.
These two diagrams
show
happiness
ratings between two
groups
of single and married
people
.
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they
show
the difference between
couples
with
children
and without them.
This
survey was done in the US. Conforming to the first diagram, 4 age
groups
of
people
who are married are happier than single ones.The
happiness
level among married
people
varies between 40 and 45
percent
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.
People
who are in the 18 - 29, 30-49 and 65 and over years old
groups
have had the biggest percentage of
happiness
. At the same time, three
groups
of single
people
show
lower percentage rates which are between 21 and 22, but the group of
people
that are 65 years old and over unmarried have big differences and their
happiness
rate is about 34
percent
.
In addition
,
couples
who are married and have
children
younger than 18 years old are happier than the other 2
groups
with 18+
children
and with no
children
.
Couples
with
children
under 18 have
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a 44
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percent
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per cent
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happiness
rating, with 18+ only 41
percent
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per cent
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and with no
children
43
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per cent
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percent
.
All over
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Overall
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, these diagrams
show
that the
happiness
rate among married
couples
is higher than
unmarried
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among unmarried
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couples
.
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