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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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In the modern days, youngsters watching
newspapers
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 or
news
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 on TV have become a rare sight in many countries. It is believed that they have lost the culture that people have been doing every single morning.
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 of all, young people don't watch the
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 is because they are able to gain
news
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 from the internet. In the era of technology, almost everyone is connected via the internet either through mobile phones or laptops that are easily accessed.
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, social network platform
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 as Instagram and Facebook
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 contains thousands and thousands of information all over the world. They allow teens to obtain information with a few simple clicks.
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, they neither have an interest in watching
newspapers
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 noor TV
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 programs. To solve
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 problem, schools should educate
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 on the importance of reading
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 and nurture their interest in it from a young age.
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, parent behaviour is
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 the reason causing them not to watch the
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.
Parents
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 nowadays are raising their
children
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 surrounded by electronic gadgets all the time.
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, they use their phones in front of the
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 to either entertain themselves or to distract the kids while feeding.
Children
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, who learn behaviours through their
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 ' influence, follow what their
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 did naturally. In order to tackle
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 problem,
parents
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 should make conscious efforts to ensure they do things that they want their
children
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 to duplicate; it can be reading
newspapers
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 or watching the
news
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 on television in front of them and explaining its importance. In conclusion,
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 newspaper editors and the media industry face threats from growing technology, these problems are not insurmountable. In my view, it is the responsibility of the
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 and schools to tackle
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 issue and they should begin by considering some of the solutions proposed above.

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